My song
"Drown"
[Verse 1]
Just one look sets my heart ablaze,
Just one look into your beautiful eyes.
I'm trapped and I can't escape this maze.
My body lives while my spirit dies.
[Pre-Chorus]
My love will never go awry.
Cross my heart and hope to die.
[Chorus]
But we mix like black and bleach.
You are far beyond my reach.
Every day I sit and brood,
Because my life means nothing without you.
[Verse 2]
Please give me one chance at happiness.
Please fill this endless hole.
Your love could give me bliss.
It could give warmth to my soul.
[Pre-Chorus]
[Chorus]
[Bridge]
Please end my eternal hell.
Wake me out of this unbreakable shell.
If you knew how deeply I suffer,
All throughout your body you would shiver.
[Verse 3]
My heart is broken and my mind has come apart.
So can you please save me before I break down?
It's been years since the rain did start.
So can you please save me before I drown?
[Pre-Chorus]
[Chorus]
Took me less than one or two hours to write.
- comments: (7)
Válaszok
It's an anti-war song called "Pawn Men". This song is called "Drown."
These were the very first lyrics I ever wrote. I've written ten so far in less than a year! They've gotten much better. I tried to add the song titles and what they're about, but the stupid ass site wouldn't let me. Stupid spam filter...
The best song I ever wrote was a song based on the film 'Friday the 13th'. It's quite dark. WOOAHHAHAHA!!
Is your song anti-war or asylum? Following in the footsteps of Ozzy who wrote a lot of anti-war songs.
What is this song called then?
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† Coolstreaky †
Yeah I have a war song too. It's currently untitled.
MMM, I could not agree more! I hate these bands that sing about nothing but LURRRRVE!
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† Coolstreaky †
Good...give us the music to have a whole view of your song.....and one advice....don't write many love songs the world is full of that and they became bored of it....find something unusual to write about.....be a pioneer
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King Ozzy
Impressive- I am a shıt song writer XD
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† Coolstreaky †