ok good idea's.......

but last night I came up with a idea for a song and here is the first lines of the song......

" We jumped into the pit of fire, fighting with the eternal desire,
for the right to have the ultimate power.... Which is Hells Eternal Fire!!!!!!!!

But the devil would not give it up, without a fight.... The devil gave all that he had and used all his powers that he could summon...... But in the end we can out of the fight with the right to use hell's Ultimate power..... Hell's Eternal Fire!!!!!!!!!

so please tell me what you all thought of my lyrics..... and dont be shy about what you want to say

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Ozzy Is My Blood and My Life